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BklynBat
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Location: Brooklyn,NY
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| Posted on 02-09-2006 18:05 |
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Well heres my wonder woman,I dont know if she looks any good,I'll let all of you out there be the judge. Thinking about inking it but I'll wait for your feedback first.
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spencer1984
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Location: Upstate NY
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| Posted on 02-09-2006 22:50 |
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Looks pretty good, nice work! |
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Panzer
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Location: Garland, TX
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| Posted on 07-09-2006 13:51 |
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very cool
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RE: A Wonderful Woman |
Razhwurz
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| Posted on 07-09-2006 15:57 |
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Cool, I see you did remove the clashing hair strands and gave her a rounder face, I particulaly like the muscles and, without meaning to be perverted, breasts; the entire torso has dynamic definition.
Though next time you might want to try to tapper of the forearms a little more, and increase the length of her hands. And it would be a good idea to shrink her thighes a bit and give her more space between her legs.
All in all, great work, I eagerly await your next drawing.
Never start with the head; the victim gets all fuzzy!
R.I.P. Heath
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Caleson
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Location: Rockville, IA
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That's pretty nice, BklynBat. As Razhwurz said, the face has a nice roundness and the chest is well shaped. I occasionally have a tough time with those myself. Here are some observations and potential points for improvement:
- The whole scale of the illustration seems to gradually get larger and larger from the top to the bottom. Her head is a bit small compared to her torso, and the legs are quite thick compared to the torso. I've done this many times by accident; although, it usually seems to go from big to small.
- Her left-hand wrist tends to puff outward rather than inward from her hand. Take a quick look at your own wrist for some ideas on modification.
- The right arm could use some reworking. The bicep is overly long which causes the forearm to be very stout. With her arm straight down like that, her elbow joint should roughly meet up with the bottom of her rib cage.
- At that angle, adding in a subtle cheekbone could do wonders in showing off her femininity.
I hope I don't come off sounding too harsh or arrogant, considering I have yet to post an original piece of my own. But those were some of the most glaring areas for improvement that I saw. You've got some nice skills and I'm sure you'll develop any even better style in time.
A simple practice you can do for an accurate body structure is to pose yourself in the way your trying to illustrate and take note of where your limbs, joints, muscles, etc line up with other parts. Of course, not everything will be entirely accurate between your structure and a woman's (assuming you're a guy), but it should give you a good idea on keeping the anatomy from ending up looking awkward.
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