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Phil
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Location: Gotham City
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| Posted on 01-06-2007 17:43 |
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at last i have made a mini comic! haha...i know it's not as good as my regular pictures, but oh my goodness...it took so long. i could handle the drawing and inking, but the coloring took forever...and my coloring isnt even all that detailed in this.
anyways...my goal was to make a modern version of the adam west batman, lol. i couldnt think of a dialogue. i wanted to make it funny, but i couldnt think of anything.
can someone put in dialogue? it would be awesome!
http://batmanytb.com/pictures/thumbnails.php?album=4 |
 
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Chris
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Location: Richmond, Indiana
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| Posted on 01-06-2007 18:54 |
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Awesome work! And, in my opinion, that pages doesn't need any dialogue. It works great without it.
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The Riddler
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Location: Cleveland
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| Posted on 02-06-2007 07:10 |
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wow AWSOME DUDE!!!!
Alfred- Why do we fall Sir?.........So we can
learn to pick ourselves up.
Bruce- You still havent givin up on me.
Alfred- Nevah! |
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spencer1984
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Location: Upstate NY
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| Posted on 02-06-2007 07:36 |
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Excellent work, Phil! I agree with Chris - I kind of like the look of it without dialogue. maybe just a few words in the panels below the splash, but that's it.
There is one thing that I would suggest: the Batmobile's steering wheel & column look a little like they are angled toward the drivers' door. If you angled the column so it was pointed towards Batman's chest emblem and made the wheel more oval, it would be perfect. Mechanical objects are a lot less forgiving than organics when it comes to foreshortening and perspective, so I know it can be tricky.
The complete history of the Batmobile: BatmobileHistory.com
Scale models of Batmobiles & more: spencer1984.com |
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real-dark-knight
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Location: The Shadow Of St Albans Abbey
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| Posted on 23-06-2007 06:14 |
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Thats excellent! I think thats the best thing I've seen you do since I've been around here. |
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