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Posted on 21-09-2008 19:46 |
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Posted on 22-09-2008 12:33 |
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Overall its an awesome picture. You're very detailed when it comes to Batman's costume which I'm sure was tricky. There's one small thing I'm unsure about and its the cowl. I can't explain but its a little weird.
Still though, its a great piece.
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Posted on 22-09-2008 19:51 |
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tried to fix some mistakes.
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Posted on 23-09-2008 13:16 |
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Nice work, Phil. You did a really good job on the Bat-suit. |
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| RE: The Dark Knight vs The Joker -
Posted on 25-09-2008 16:36 |
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a little more touch ups...
i'm trying to get it as realistic as possible, but i'm too lazy. realistic art work requires a lot of patience and time. there's no doubt i could do it, i'm just...lazy. lol. well w/e, it's a tad bit better than the previous 2.
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| RE: The Dark Knight vs The Joker -
Posted on 27-09-2008 00:09 |
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That's really neat, Phil. Lots of cool lighting, and I like how you slimmed Batman's leg thickness. If you want to keeping improving it, I think some anatomical proportions could be touched up. Batman's head seems a little small for his body. His limbs are large and long in a way that I think I've seen in your work before. This might hold true a tad on Joker, but it's mainly Batman.
Secondly, Batman's complexion is so pale and gray that it's a bit inhuman. More flesh tone and some yellow/orange reflection of the fire would help. And the prominence of his top teeth bared so fiercely reminds me of a vicious Virginia opossum. I think it's also the definition of the individual teeth seen in the latest version that aids this; they almost look sharp. Deemphasizing that would help.
Removing the black outlines of the characters really improved the realism, but I do notice a lot of transparency on Joker's outlined gloves. Also, if you really want to get technical, I doubt Batman's eyes would have the brightest, purest white in a scene like this - the explosion probably would (unless he's wearing some sort of bright lenses). Maybe you could slightly dull the eyes unless you just like that emphasis.
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Posted on 27-09-2008 09:18 |
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the anatomical proportions are beyond saving at this point, but i tried to fix w/e was needed for batman's face. i'm moving on...i worked on this picture for far too long, lol.
right click the image, and select view image. the picture seems a little better on a white background. since this website is all dark, the picture doesn't look as dark.
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Posted on 27-09-2008 16:10 |
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Yeah, you can only do so much fixing. As it stands, it's a very nice digital work and a piece to be proud of.
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Posted on 27-09-2008 16:52 |
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I love it!
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Posted on 30-09-2008 03:15 |
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hey man stop drawing your making everyone look bad Panda Jerck! ...no but seriously your an awsome artist
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Posted on 30-09-2008 08:49 |
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haha i wish i had more comments though. it seems as if there are a lot of forum viewers, but not too many forum members. or members who just look at stuff, and dont voice their opinion.
this thing got 700 views or so, haha.
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