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After seeing your timeline again and reading your complete prologue I realize this is a post everything we know about Batman...a good idea if you don't mind would be Vampire Bat looking into his past and into the 'Batman Family Tree' |
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Posted on 30-01-2010 14:38 |
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Yeah, probably in one scene or two....
"Things are always going to get worst before they get better."
[Alfred Pennyworth]
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CHAPTER ONE
INT. WAYNE ENTERPRISES BASEMENT - DAY
Alexander Grayson walks inside of the brightly lit up, white-tiled basement. He walks down from the stairs next to the elevator. Many feet in front of Alexander is a table full of small devices as well as a police scanner used for the Vampire Bat. Ben Grayson is on the other side of the table, sitting on an old fashioned 2010 desk chair. The Tumbler is on the opposite side of the room, ready to go any minute.
Alexander: So, Ben... This all I got?
Ben: Afraid so, Alex...
The police scanner goes off.
<Jamison Vine has reported to have been seen downtown Gotham, near Thomas Wayne Airport. Over.>
Alexander and Ben look down, upon the scanner...
Ben: Will you be taking that, Alex?
There is a silence in the room...
Alexander: ...Yes.
Alexander walks toward the elevator as the doors slowly begin to open. Ben shouts out to Alex as he walks into the elevator.
Ben: There's some things you should know before you go out, Alex--
The doors are closing...
Alexander: Is the--
Ben: The cage was modifi--
The doors close.
INT. WAYNE ENTERPRISES ROOF - DAY
Alex gets out of the elevator. In front of him is a cage and on the left side of the cage stands a security guard. In the cage stands the armored suit of Vampire Bat.
Alexander: Good morning, Linus.
Linus: Hello, Mister Grayson.
Alex walks over to the cage to open it. He puts his hands out to the handle, about to pull it.
Alexander: Please... Don't call me that. Reminds me of my father...
Linus: Uh huh?
Alexander: Wouldn't want to feel old, would I?
The cage door is opened.
Linus: Then what the hell should I call you?
Alexander: Exactly what everybody else calls me these days...
Linus: Mister Grayson?
Alexander (slightly grinning as he strugles with opening up the lock holding the suit in place on the boots): No...
Linus: Hottest man alive? Richest man in Gotham? Son of a--
Alexander: No, what they call me-- Him.
Linus: Vampire--
Alexander: *clicking his toung against the top of his mouth* Your a smart man, Linus.
Linus: Very well, mister Bat.
Fully dressed in the Vampire Bat suit, Alexander jumps off the edge of the building, putting on his mask in mid air.
"Things are always going to get worst before they get better."
[Alfred Pennyworth]
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Posted on 05-02-2010 13:09 |
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Wow...awesome!!
Hello Gotham. I'm Erin. Ozzy Cobblepot's Biggest Fan. Love you Pengy!
Betcha never, betcha never, betcha never thought we'd get this far.
Betcha never, never ever, betcha never thought you'd touch my heart.
Betcha never, betcha never, betcha never thought I'd surrender.
Betcha never thought you'd ever get with me.
I betcha never thought of that. |
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Posted on 05-02-2010 17:30 |
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Great story so far RBB |
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Posted on 06-02-2010 01:42 |
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Thanks!! I'm really grateful you two are reading this, I think I'll post it on other sites too to get a bigger crowd.
"Things are always going to get worst before they get better."
[Alfred Pennyworth]
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Posted on 08-02-2010 11:26 |
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The best site for that is fanfiction.net, I've read alot of CSI fiction there and I think Erin has put a few of her stories there as well...Good Luck |
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Posted on 22-02-2010 22:53 |
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CHAPTER TWO
EXT. GOTHAM CITY CATHEDRAL - DAY
A police car races toward the bunch of other SWAT vehicles already on the street beneath a Gotham City cathedral. On the roof top of the cathedral stands a man dressed up as the Batman. The fake costume looks as if it were designed by a bunch of apes. The man dressed as a legend carries a machine gun, not loaded, and redesigned as a graphical. The police on ground level aim their guns up toward the man, standing straight up. Suddenly, dozens upon dozens of vampire bats burst through the glass windows from behind him. The fake Batman stands still as the bats burst from behind him. The police and SWAT crew at the bottom of the building are startled. Many bullets are shed...
MORE COMING SOON...
"Things are always going to get worst before they get better."
[Alfred Pennyworth]
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Posted on 23-02-2010 18:55 |
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Great story and good cliffhanger too |
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