I'll give you a more concrete analysis later when I have a bit more time to read it all, but so far it sounds pretty good.
good job
be sure to check out my fan fics
Batman Legacy
Batman Supremacy
Batman Destiny (currently being worked on)
I'm not sure if the links in my sig work, so there are the titles... and if you're interested you can just look em up.
see ya around
"I went around the world, searched in all the shadows. And there is something out there in the darkness, something terrifying, something that will not stop until it gets revenge... Me"
